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Originally Posted by garinda
Though if you would like to share your own poems with us, in an appropriate section of Accy Web, I'll gladly critique them, and offer you my opinion.
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There is a thread here
http://www.accringtonweb.com/forum/f...oets-5579.html
And one of mine from that thread...
"
Accrington Stinks,well it used to at least,
down by the river stink,really made me blink it did,
walking by the Hynburn stream,nothing fresh,just a smelly mess,
coz
Accrington Stinks well it used to at least - down by the Hynburn made my eyes sting...
from the pen and ink of the Broad Oak waste pipe...chemical smellies poured out of pipes,filled the air with something ripe.
But above the factory the stream ran clear and one day went to fish in the clean cool pool,
there was a flash of silver,out dashed a trout and swallowed me worm,hook line and sinker,
That night,had a fish for tea and the
Accrington stink was a fishy one - oh dear."
Kestrel X 2004.