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Old 06-05-2007, 00:59   #15
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Re: poetry and rhymes

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Originally Posted by ANNE View Post
I had this printed in some book or other when I entered this in a competition.

Missing You.

I miss you now, more than I ever did before.
The hurt and the pain lesson not with age.
they say time heals, but that's not true.
It's me that has to go on living with out you.
They took you from my loving arms, I've got to live without you.
I will always hurt inside when I think of you.
I will always go on missing you.
I was rather surprised they wanted to publish it has it's not very good.

It was ok but the end sentence doesn't make sense
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