One thing I allways notice when going thru cv's is how many people are too lazy to use the spellcheck feature on their PC , absolutly no excuse for not using it for a final check before clicking 'print' .
Nothing worse for an older prospective employer than having to read or try to decipher 'txt speak' either so thats a definate no-no .
Probably not a problem since you are a guy , use only white paper
If you have a 'clean' driving license make a special note of pointing that out , otherwise it's ok just to mention you are a licensed driver.
No mention of any sort of family commitments , remember prospective employers want people to turn up for every shift, not cry off during week one because Grandma has to go get her toenails clipped .
One final thing, if you get called in for an interview and have any tattoos visible ,try to cover them up , long sleeves , top button fastened etc.
Good luck with the job hunt