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Oldgobbin · 23-02-2010, 19:36

As I said, it was the tone of the thing that annoyed me. What a difference could be made by changing just a couple of words:

From Hard-up Accrington are pleading with fans to loan them patio heaters to help thaw out the pitch. The club are concerned that the current big freeze will force them to call off tonight's clash against Burton.

to-Enterprising Accrington Stanley are encouraging fans to loan them patio heaters to help thaw out the pitch. The club are determined that the current big freeze should not force them to call off tonight's clash against Burton

Reads better now, dunnit?

23-02-2010, 19:36	#35
Oldgobbin Full Member+ Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 554 Liked: 3 times Rep Power: 58	Re: Get your heaters out!! :) :) As I said, it was the tone of the thing that annoyed me. What a difference could be made by changing just a couple of words: From Hard-up Accrington are pleading with fans to loan them patio heaters to help thaw out the pitch. The club are concerned that the current big freeze will force them to call off tonight's clash against Burton. to-Enterprising Accrington Stanley are encouraging fans to loan them patio heaters to help thaw out the pitch. The club are determined that the current big freeze should not force them to call off tonight's clash against Burton Reads better now, dunnit? Last edited by Oldgobbin; 23-02-2010 at 19:40.