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Originally Posted by Oldgobbin
As I said, it was the tone of the thing that annoyed me. What a difference could be made by changing just a couple of words:
From [Hard-up Accrington are pleading with fans to loan them patio heaters to help thaw out the pitch. The club are concerned that the current big freeze will force them to call off tonight's clash against Burton.
to-Enterprising Accrimgton Stanley are encouraging fans to loan them patio heaters to help thaw out the pitch. The club are concerned that the current big freeze will force them to call off tonight's clash against Burton
Reads better now, dunnit?
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Superb!!
I think you are Mr Heys on a normal/good day!!
